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Characters lack logic.

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It’s frustrating that the characters are lacking in logical thinking on major plot points. For example, Peter pursuing “the spy”, despite having no evidence that its actually a spy, and while his community has just been bombed, he chooses to continue the fruitless chase instead of returning to check on his people. It makes no..

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