View: kevinspierce - page 197

Paper Thin Secondary Characters

Review from Days of Want Series, Books 1-7 →

The lead characters go through life self absorbed and without empathy. Anyone not a primary character is a thin shade, discarded without a thought, never considered again. The author does a poor job of continuity and consistency. Clothing morphs from prison garb to street clothes. Primary and secondary characters act in unnatural ways to provide..

Read more