just liked the story,but more story and less guns and killing.but this is the reality of a sinful world.
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I just couldn’t finish. I think Wanda the librarian was the writer. Implausible scenarios, too many to list, and an absolute zero understanding of human nature. Less than a zero understanding tactical scenarios. Character development zero. I felt no relationship to any of the characters. I tried but just could not finish. The short parts..
The story was OK. My problem is a 3 book “set” that was the length of a normal novel. Each book was was 5 to 7 hours which means he was just putting out mini-books so his listeners/readers will buy many more books from him. Also the narrator was fairly plain. He mad no voice..
PZ
Review from Population Zero: Book 3 →
Imho this should have been a short story. The amount of detail is excessive and unnecessary…an hour short of finishing (!) I gave up. The narrator is WAY too much. It needed a softer touch. I usually adore this kind of deep dive but will stick with writers who have proven their skill at writing..
I beg to not waste a credit.
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