Wordy, wordy, wordy Too much telling and not a lot of showing. I must have listened to about 1/3 of the story before I threw in the towel
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If you are going to listen or read this series this is the way to do it! 85 hours of fun. The stories will have you scratching your head at times at the decisions that the characters make, and you’ll want to pull them aside and tell them to make different decisions, however, that is..
80% amusing and 20% crap. The 80% parts are when Esper bothers being Esper, Kubu is goofy yet sobering, Tiffany is a teenage apprentice, Wesley squared is a new dynamic, and the mission titles are grand.The 20% negative is the fact the biggest obstacle for the protagonists is Esper’s hemming & hawing to the point..
Awesome litrpg
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I loved the original black ocean series and that started off slow, but the world building and characters were top notch and I couldn’t put the book down. This series however was a true disappointment even to the end although I kept hoping it would get better. The characters in this series are the embodiment..
This book isn’t very exciting. The premise is a GM of DnD game gets put in his own campaign. He then decides he “just wants to tag along”. So for the first few HOURS of the book it is just him walking behind everyone and talking to himself in his head going “Hmmm I wonder..






