the constant Whooshing sound is distracting and should be removed to make the books more streamlined.
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Sadly, I hated the main character.
Review from Galaxy Outlaws: The Complete Black Ocean Mobius Missions, 1-16.5 →
The main character’s antics should have been “cute” but instead where so stupid and repetitive all attempts at wit where lost. In a series that tried to make me laugh it only made me frustrated and groan.
What’s with the’whoosh’ sound effects every time there’s a pov change? incredibly distracting and unnecessary
I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys Adventure fantasy I enjoyed the story the first book was a little slow The second book was paste really well And the third book concluded the story well
As noted in some other reviews, the performance is rough in part 1 but stick with it and it gets much better by part 2
First I am not a writer nor does my technical expertise require perfect spelling or grammer, so if you disagree with me about the book review, keep it to the topic and don’t try and be arrogant. I chose this because I did not see anything else interesting at the time and for the number..
Rachon promises to be an interesting, complex character but he’s never explained well and he always seems like he could be made an ally with far less effort than opposing him. That doesn’t create conflict though… ultimately this makes the eventual conflict feel artificial. I honestly think the author wrote his beloved D&D character into..
All over the place
Review from Twinborn Chronicles →
I got this compilation cheap but couldn’t finish it because it felt like several writers worked on it and they each had different characters they loved. Plus the characters invented devices or had magic available that could have been used in much more intelligent ways, so it was difficult to like characters who failed to..
I was blessed to only have this given to me, I love fire fly the T.V. Show and this book gave it back to me! I loved listening to it and I bet so will YOU.
It’s not great. Not at all. I don’t know if it becomes steampunk later on in the books, but I couldn’t stand to listen that far in. I say this, because I found it through the steampunk genre list on here. It seems pretty vanilla medieval. The characters ambitions are either super unclear, or WAY..