sometimes it felt a little slow to get going, but once I was hooked I was hooked!
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“You cannot handle the truth!”. Imagine if Jack Nicholson’s character in A Few Good Men had said that? This writer never uses contractions. it’s weird. And the characters are shallow and have zero back story. One of the characters kills another characters loved one in one scene and in the next scene, they go on..
Sucks
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If you’ve enjoyed the Black Ocean so far, and want more lore and expansion, this is for you. Some familiar characters but not the old crew, and Astral Prime does more to build the Universe. Don’t waste your time pining for the old stories. Just enjoy the new characters and the occasional nod to your..
This was a great series. It was much too long to listen to consecutively, I’d listen to another book, then catch another episode and catch up quickly to where I left off and be just as entertained. Like watching your favorite long running tv show. The adventures wove together, a bad boy outlaw group with..
Bought this one on sale due to length and some good reviews. Listen to the critical reviews. The idea for the story is OK, but the author needed to flesh it out more before beginning to write it. The two worlds concept is poorly introduced and poorly implemented. The reader has to infer far too..
Delightful concept, good performance, but only meh in the writing
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The writing was only meh. I would give five stars to the world building as it was well crafted and thought out.I would give 4 stars to the characterization as the characters were highly relatable and easy to cheer on.However the actual writing only earns 1.5 to 2 stars. Extremely pulpy with bad timing. Some..




