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Author needs an editor

Review from Twinborn Chronicles →

I enjoyed the first three books in this series, but these are suffering from a lack of likable characters (solution to every situation? Either consider killing someone or just kill them) and incredibly repetitive dialogue and descriptive sections that could be solved by having a halfway decent editor read through these books before publishing to..

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disappointing and inconsistent

Review from Black Ocean: Mercy for Hire →

join the universe’s stupidest adventurer; an all powerful wizard barbie that is mentally 500 years old but still gets out smarted by the simplest of criminal minds.watch her as she leaves her child-dog companion to guard prostitutes at work because she thinks his mind is too young for a rescue mission this book is nothing..

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Great time waster

Review from Black Ocean: Mercy for Hire →

To be blunt and nonspoilery the main character Esper is a Mary Sue and not like the well written ones. It really says something about the character when you’re more invested in the side characters instead of the main protagonist. Speaking of side characters it seemed every female was either hot intelligent or both (most..

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