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Epically ruined

Review from The Runesmith →

So much possibility in the story and characters but leans way hard on ignoring previously established stakes to try to make something of nothing. Half the book explains why/how something is happening just for the the next half to ignore those constraints. BBEG has magic that is always just powerful enough to work, even if..

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contrived and difficult

Review from Deepwater Dungeon →

i love ryan rimmels work but this is so very forced. its excruciating trying to slog through the endless tedium to this crabs sentience and ability to communicate… i just cant.i stopped half way through chapter 5, it may pick up later but im out. the narrator didnt do it any favors either. too formal,..

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Epic

Review from The Runesmith →

Brilliant work ! Great story telling !! Ivan Kal knows how to weive in fantasy and emotion that grabs the listener and the narration is fluid and masterful. 10/10 looking forward to the next book.

U need to kno ur audience bro

Review from The Runesmith →

I love ur writing, I love ur books, but this one pissed me off towards the end. Y give this whole schpiel about Ryun having this domain ability that basically allows him to be a god within his realm of influence …n then when we don’t get to see him use it when he fights?!?!?!?..

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like watching a horror film

Review from The Runesmith →

There are moments in this book that will get your heart racing, many books fail in this genre in regards to their villains, they are full of bluster and brash but when push comes to shove you know they will fall. The RA is a villain that cannot be easily predicted story wise, when he..

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