Loved the story but wish there was a female narrator to help the current narrator. Seems like some of the characters voices get very similar sometimes and it’s hard to differentiate when the pov switches.
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More of “the message”.
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I really wanted to love this, but I couldn’t because of the writing. Gaps in the story that should have been persued, characters without depth or development, glossed over technical details, it was all very disconnected. If a character in your story has a name, they should have an introduction, a description, and an explanation..
I’ve enjoyed the JDKirk (Hutchison’s pen name) series revolving around Scottish Detective Jack Logan. A good set of characters and an amazing narrator. Gave this series a try because it looked goofy and might possibly turn out to be a winner. Nah. It’s possibly fun if you’ve just started puberty–they use a lot of swears..
Great Story
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