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loved it!

Review from Monsters and Legends →

A must read for any litrpg/progression fantasy nerd like myself. It could have been edited down some but that didn’t take away from the enjoyable story. I’m eagerly awaiting the next book in the series!

Fun Story

Review from Boom Box →

Good book. Well told and narrated well! I have to admit the author got heavy on the swears and generous with the F-bombs in the last book but it was still lots of fun!

Great story, amateur writing

Review from Monsters and Legends →

This is one where the story is very captivating, but you are pulled out of it way to often by really poor writing.This book is clearly written by an amateur with no editor. Biggest complaint is unnecessary reputation, lots of “he used stab and stabbed”, or “the chamber was a large chamber”. there was also..

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poor pacing

Review from Monsters and Legends →

Too much talk about power levels with no context in the beginning. Author gives no scale and no build up for how strong they’re supposed to be. You don’t start with the main characters at god tier. Wasts too much time talking about power levels and weapons of people who die instantly. Why should I..

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