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Pathetic MC

Review from Soulsmith →

Not one thing in this book goes the way the MC planned. He is just dragged around by other people. If this is the type of character you want to write about why make him the MC. He would have been much better as a side character instead. Then maybe it would make more sense.

Best so far

Review from Blackflame →

This book was the best in the series so far, but why does the MC have to be so pathetic. He isn’t clever or a good planner like the writer wants you to believe. He is a coward that is always thrown into situations far above him and through the help of his allies gets..

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Waste of time, just an exposition dump

Review from Skysworn →

This book is easily the worst in the series. 80% of the book is about random other characters and exposition not directly related to the main characters at all. I was pulling my hair out when it went from one chapter to the next about characters I don’t care about.

Pathetic MC

Review from Unsouled →

The first half of this book was an utter waist of time. It could have been condensed into about 30min instead of over four hours and had the same impact on the story. Then there is the MC, he is pathetic. Never does anything in the story by himself. He is always riding on the..

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It Was Good…

Review from Tsumiko and the Enslaved Fox →

But it was so slow!! and it never picks up either. The two brief action scenes are treated as unimportant next to all the narrative of nothing happening. The heroine was never in any real danger, the hero loved her immediately with minimal and dismal pushback. The enslavement was a side note. Details that might..

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gave up on 2nd book

Review from Soulsmith →

I am not a fantasy fan. last fantasy I read was the Hobbit In 1971 (the only decent read in the whole series, just my opionion). Gave the first book in this sreies a try, struggled threw it and gave up by the third chapter in this book. If this yout thing fine have at..

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