Story is just very slow and drawn out. If your selling a book as a cultivation book, you dont have to spend 3-4 chapters explaining what it is and how it works. The characters are very childish and immature in a very serious and mature setting. The clash just feel strange and makes everything hard..
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I did not like the ending
Review from Uncrowned →
the entire story is one person being treated unfairly, no real reason besides social prejudice. it may be a cultural thing I don’t understand, but it’s not really “conflict” if it’s random people being mean for no reason, in violation of what the public “rules” are and if practiced in actuality would result in a..
Such twists
Review from Hard Mode →
This book feels like a self-published homage to Jim Butcher’s Dresden Files series, and at times it verges on being too blatant a rip-off. The pop culture references feel jarring and out of character for the rest of the dialog from our first-person protagonist. The narrator has a great voice, which only suffers when he..
Interesting Twists
Review from Ghostwater →
So I waited until listening to the first 2 books in this series before writing this, hoping that the second book would help improve things. And while it does get better, I really just don’t find this series enjoyable. While I’m relatively new to the Cultivation genre of stories, the elements of it share a..
Picked this one up on as whim basically looking for something new to listen to while waiting on a few audios still in production. Good bye another 4 credits as I intend to grab the rest currently available in audio..That and I’m grabbing all the ebooks as this series (in written form) is complete.Strong urban..
not bad better than the last one
Review from Ghostwater →
to stort
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