ok so this was a tough listen, all in all a good plot, the writer puts in so much filler im 90 percent sure that he has AI edit and increase what he writes. “i only have minutes before the quest ends…..let’s take a hour of inner monologue to decide what to do”. at least there wasn’t a ton of DEI bull like other Litrpgs lately. if you can get over the filler junk which writers use to fill pages for patreon releases (yes I know thats why you do it) and skip the BS its actually pretty good. lastly the narrator…dude you have a good voice so why do you make the MC sound like a idiot…everything you do that for edges voice you make him sound like Patrick star from SpongeBob and all I can think about is “is mayonnaise a instrument”
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