The story itself is fine, it does get dragged down a little usless things sometimes but thats whatever.
The real thing that gets me alot is the naming mistakes.
They will be talking about a monster and person and in the same convo mess up the names.
A big one is with the gremlins, will call them that and in the same convo call them goblins…which is it.
Then thry slip up calling the Orek..idk how you spell that, but call them Orcs.
If your picking a name that the characters use stop switching randomly, it makes it feel like AI.
Also they spend weird moments focused in on sexual stuff involving others, just explaining things out.
it feels so uncomfortable sometimes, or how cold he feels to his own daughter.
I understand the Prometheus is muting their emotions, but he feels very distant from the daughter he just got back.
It is an ok story, and thats all.
Do not come into this expecting somethung great.