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I’ve listened to all Bobby’s books. This is one of the best that he’s done. I really enjoyed and look forward to every minute of listening

The author desperately needed a better editor, lots of repetitive and overlong prose, too much of the story was clearly silly and disbelief could not be suspended.

I went into this novella with no expectations, and the qualitative writing and narrative construction are much better than I could have anticipated. The relationship is built through interactions versus instalove and suspension of disbelief.

This was a hard story for me to listen to. Not because of the content, but because there were so many times during the story that I had to rewind because I couldn’t remember how we had gotten there. His name is Stone, but his real name is William. He had an internship which is..

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Love the dominance, submission, taunting, the heat. I think it was good narration. Plot/scene seem to jump all over.

Just confusing. I found this story difficult to follow, often rewinding to understand, and sometimes still confused. Lots of moving parts. Also, confused on accents of characters. So yea, not bad, but a little harder to follow, compared to the other stories in this series. Liked the wrap up/epilogue.

Characters progress very well and their personas stay consistent throughout their story, and the way they interact with each other very enjoyable

The technical details of space can be a little difficult to follow initially, if you are a constant multi-tasker lie me. A little re-listening here and there, but I was hooked! I have the second book playing now and I am already eager for 3 & 4!

Stone did not deserve her. The mistakes he made and his disregard of her pain was forgivable and having her return to him and forgive him was cringy.