Whole chapters were just additional info that wasn’t helpful. The final escalation felt like one long ramble. You’ve already got 2 protagonists; why not add more point of views? This could have been much better organized if additional characters were fleshed out more. Give viewpoints from Jared, Jack and Constance. It would have helped to..
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Sad
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ANOTHER WINNER !!
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Paradise
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Good beginning to the series
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the way the book flowed
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