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Weak sauce.

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

How could a devastating EMP/nuclear attack story be boring? Have the main characters thoroughly prepared to the extent they own a sporting goods store and have a pristinely refurbished classic 4×4. Who wants to see characters struggle in any way? Have every main character be great and awesome and helpful and cheerful. No need for..

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Amateurish

Review from Captain Jack →

This book felt very amateurish, both writing ,plot and narration. If you’d like a tightly written intelligent book this one would not be for you you

Painful, very painful man

Review from Hammond’s Hardcases →

Too much Deus ex Machina. Unrealistic characters whose skill development more closely mirrored a Dungeons & Dragons game than the months of training that would realistically be required. Unnecessarily dramatic romantic scenes. The lieutenant consistently made stupid tactical decisions in spite of good information. The narrator’s pauses and breaks fell in unnatural positions giving the..

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Storyline good

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

The storyline is good . I did return this book without finishing it . I found it too wordy , every detail ,every action and too much of what the characters say is explained . I don’t know how old this author is but the writing passes for a high school student .