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Plot By Stupidity

Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →

Everything has to be explained to a person who has gaming knowledge. Bad people lie and do bad things and look bad people lie and do even worse things WOW how could they do this to me/us they’re not nice THIS SUCKS BECAUSE STUPIDITY AND IGNORANCE ARE NOT GOOD PLOTS

Hmmm

Review from Girl Jacked →

I though over all this was a good story with potential… i would have liked better character development … some sometimes i felt it seems stilted. This could be in part to the narration. I might get the second book but hesitate because of the narration… there’s a difference in just reading the book as..

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more like a kids book

Review from Hotel Megalodon →

just like my post it was lacking details! i love sharks!i love books about sharks. but with true shark behavior. this book took way to many liberties with Sharks backing up, doing life support damage like he knows. i give it a 3. narrator needs work.

Childish

Review from Girl Jacked →

Book is written as in first grade, narration is spoken like an 8th grader. I made it to chapter 10 and you still have no plot movement. Just awful.

very boring

Review from The Dark Road Series Collection →

the writer goes on and on explaining each step a character is doing it’s like hes just trying to get the pages written whether its enjoyable or not the narrator shows no emotion while reading making it a very boring listenI’m sorry