I really enjoy the work of this author but was disappointed with the excess verbiage in this one. The editors should have cut at least 30% from the book. It became even worse in audiobook format. The romance section was quite juvenile for these particular protagonists. The details of ASW were interesting and the characters..
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Good story
Review from The Town →
TLDR: It’s an ok story but I feel like some other Litrpg’s did it better in some aspects. I recommend Video Game Plotline tester if you want a story about making money in VR, and Occultist if you want teen drama revenge story in VR. The Land or Life Reset if you want a more..
Starts off slow.
Review from Scorpion in the Sea →
Exceptional
Review from Awaken Online: Ember →
back to the action
Review from Awaken Online: Unity →
I don’t like giving spoilers, so I’ll keep it general. I really liked the story, very good character development, great environment and magic descriptions, good pacing, and an interesting world build. He uses the same or very similar phrases a bit too often, but other than that, it’s very enjoyable. Mr. Stifel, though, detracts greatly..








