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Goodish

Review from Awaken Online: Catharsis →

story is alright. there are some edgy parts that made my teeth grind in responce. The only negitive would be the voice actor. as far as narrating the surroundings or battles, it’s pretty good. However, with narrating dialogue its robotic and does nothing to bring characters to life.

I think this story could have been much better.

Review from The Lost Starship →

There are some nice elements to this story, like the world building and character development; however this novel feels unfinished. Not from a story perspective but from a quality control. First this narrator was terrible. Secondly, the writing felt like something from a creative writing class, lacking real narrative continuity. This doesn’t feel like something..

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Authored like a manga…

Review from The Lost Starship →

The vocabulary used to author this book is rather – juvenile. As if a juvenile got a thesaurus and decided to use all the shiny new words. The phrasing also has much to be desired as it’s written like the English translation of a manga. My wife really liked the book so I guess you’ll..

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Darker and Deeper

Review from Awaken Online: Dominion →

This latest installment takes us deeper into hardships faced by Jason and friends. It also takes us a bit more into how he meets his challenges and what the darkness means for him. Though certainly not a good place to start the series, it is an excellent continuation for those familiar with the earlier books…

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