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really good

Review from Space Pirate Charlie →

Probably just as good as the first the story was a little more streamlined this time so I’m not sure if I like that or I didn’t like that but it was still good with a great ending I thought and can’t wait for the next one

No energy at all.

Review from Cunning Devil →

Holy shit. This was wretched. The narrator sounds like he overdosed on opium, and in the least entertaining way. This very soft monotomous drone that just goes on and on. No idea if the story is any good, though from the small bit that registered, its bland toast.

Needed to be longer and more developed

Review from Hunger →

Great story. It just way too short, and I am not saying that because it was just a short story. The writer has gaps in the book that she jumped over with a small explanation when she could have developed the story it made it more well-rounded. It is worth the read, but expect not..

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