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Could be better….

Review from Punish the System: Book 1 →

Story wise not bad. It’s got its own unique litrpg-esque style with alot of snark and banter. My gripe is with the performance. Far too much slow Rough breathy whispering. Especially with the system messages. If they were going for background noise they nailed it. Otherwise the performance got annoying too pay attention to. In..

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The System is Asleep

Review from Punish the System: Book 1 →

This book is absolutely thrilling from the start to the finish. This book is not a warm and fuzzy book, it is a roller-coaster ride of danger and excitement with an annoyingly positive sidekick who just wants to be helpful. The world isn’t ready for this adventure but it is everything you would hope a..

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really enjoyed this!

Review from Riftside 3 →

I am eager to discover what unfolds next. I thoroughly enjoyed the book; however, I was somewhat disappointed by its ending. While it was not a cliffhanger, the conclusion felt somewhat abrupt. Overall, it was an excellent read, and I would definitely recommend it.

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Review from Bunny Girl Evolution 2 →

As much as I like the setting, and the protagonist’s interesting powers, and more, the book has some major flaws. The biggest of which is that it often uses exposition instead of letting the readers experience the moments. A big example is any of the heavily anticipated reunion scenes. Instead of letting us experience the..

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