Story wise not bad. It’s got its own unique litrpg-esque style with alot of snark and banter. My gripe is with the performance. Far too much slow Rough breathy whispering. Especially with the system messages. If they were going for background noise they nailed it. Otherwise the performance got annoying too pay attention to. In..
Could be better….
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