Very poor writing. In the first scene of conflict, main character takes a prisoner, loots his gun, and somehow, three paragraphs latter the prisoner somehow has his gun back and no one is concerned at all that their prisoner is armed. Which immediately bites them in the ass… if there are MAJOR plot holes within..
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Fantastic
Review from Dead Tired II →
Oh, this book was very enjoyable. I love the new characters, both me and my 12-year-old really enjoy all the antics and watching the characters grow. The narration and voice team did excellent as always. I really love most of the voices in this series and I can’t wait to see what happens next. The..
boring
Review from Industrial Strength Magic →
Great hero adventure!
Review from Industrial Strength Magic →
A fun read
Review from Industrial Strength Magic →
Good book overall. The humor was on point and mostly geared to a younger audience. Nothing inappropriate for younger listeners. The system is an interesting take on the genre and in curious how the author is going to develop the plot in future books. The hero can be an idiot at times, which can be..
Lots of fun
Review from Demon Card Enforcer 2 →
The narration and the story were good overall until the last part. The entire time the dungeon runs everything by his fairy and tries to keep with their original ideas…. Then in order to force a plot point, the author ignores how the dungeon has operated thus far,and has it do something completely stupid; that..






