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Idea had potential, but genuinely terrible writing. Other reviews echo this (wish I’d read them and saved myself some time) but the writer does not understand the concept of “show don’t tell”. We don’t discover things (neither does the MC) were told them. It makes the dialogue almost like Q&A with no real character development..

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This had to be written by a poor soul. The two men could have been a great love story, but the weak boy man writer is a sad person overall. I can tell you the Dr in the story was a saint or pathological narcissist!!

I was expecting a mystery thriller and instead it was a cheesy romance. Although there were some good moments, the first book was drawn out and boring. The second started out better, then devolved into a bad romance novel. I stopped listening a few chapters into it.

A lot of twist and turns- a lot of surprises. Definitely a “page turner”Kept me guessing !

I enjoyed this series, but this last one was a bit tough to get through. I just kept thinking about how much time could be saved if the characters just communicated with each other. It just felt like there was a lot of whining in this one. But I did enjoy the extended epilogue, I..

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Best Boxset. All 4 books were great! Great value and very entertaining. I’m now a fan of Keri Bevis.

Adorable characters, soft and sweet love story, low-drama conflict with quick resolution, and a delicious narrator, especially in those scenes. Lots of laughs too – though that could have been because I listened while engaged in the hobby Bernice and I share 😇 I’ll be checking out this author’s other titles!

Great dialogue. Author was able to capture each character and their relationships through restrained but always significant dialogue. The reader emphasized this with perfect character accents. Aldo appreciated that the intimate scenes were mainly left to the imagination and not graphically detailed like so many MM books.

If you’ve read Lily Mortons Deal Maker then you’ve already read this book. It’s the same plot and with the same narrator the characters are identical

I absolutely loved all these books and the narration! But I’m very sad that the 4th book isn’t on Audible. 😢