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Review from Every Little Breath →

Best prologue I’ve ever read. This book grabbed me immediately, and for the most part, it never let go. There were some underwhelming moments. The ending, in particular, needed more development — instead of dumping everything into the final thirty minutes, I wish the author had taken the time to let it breathe and fully..

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Not the best character development

Review from Absolution →

I’ve read a number of Sloane Kennedy books. Typically they have pretty decent character development, as well as relationship development. I buy the connection between main characters. In this one all aspects of the throuple were underdeveloped – it felt like developing all 3 was too much within this story or something. The part where..

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Pleasant surprise

Review from Voyageurs →

I wasn’t sure I would like this story as it could have gone wrong. But just the opposite. I very much enjoyed it and am only disappointed that it was a short story. We need a part 2.