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Unrealistic scenario

Review from Dustfall: A Post Apocalyptic Series →

I was doing ok until the wolves started thinking (talking) to themselves with human language and behavior. Yes, this is science fiction, but for me, the scenarios should be plausible and possible for me to enjoy the story. In and apocalyptic scenario, sure the wolves could become more dangerous to humans, but they are not..

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Meandering

Review from Monster →

I don’t care for the narrator, and the story just seems like it’s almost a documentary. There’s no suspense or building of narrative. It’s Joe Friday reciting the story… just the facts ma’am.