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Poor storyline

Review from The Crusader Series: Books 1-3 →

I had high hopes for this story but I was sorely disappointed. The storyline was very disjointed and I found that the character development was very weak. Beck’s character never seem to really evolve through the totality of the story. I would have liked to have seen a little bit more detail and description in..

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I really wanted to like this book

Review from The Traveler Series →

The main character, Battle, is under developed, I’m half-way through the book and I have zero emotional attachment to any of the characters. The love interest(?), an annoying single mother/Marry Sue, guilts and shames Battle into doing what she wants. The antagonists are also under developed. All of the biblical references come off preachy. I’m..

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