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holy crap the author described everything in excruciating detail without also describes our explained everything everyone it comes up over and over and over again. every fight every person ever l every thought. then every woman he meets is strong brave courageous and the males are almost all background characters. it’s so very monotonous.

love the writer and lost in the stories. can’t wait for next installment. keep the stories coming.

I am picky about books. There has to be enough depth and intelligence in the writing for me to stay with them. If I can see what’s coming, I get bored. These books are wonderful mix of great storytelling, excellent narration, comedy and adventure.

This was a hard listen, all the fights are drawn out and full of Deux Ex Machina moments leaving me skipping whole chapters just to progress a single fight scene.

Give me more, where I can find more!?!?!! I need it!!!! I want it!!!! I must have more!!!!! Not much more to to say ….some of the underlying premises seemed flaky to me at first, but at some point I cud not let that stop me from enjoying the story. I like worlds with “game-like”..

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While the start was a little rough, I was hooked within an hour or so. Decently strong characters (especially for the genre), and generally a plot that makes sense and keeps the pace up. Loved the new system, great flavor beyond ‘level up.’

This is a great start to a new series and it all comes around in the end. Can’t wait for book 2. If I had any complaints it would be that sometimes things are drawn out entirely to long but some of that is because the narration is pretty slow. I don’t like speeding up..

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I should have listened to the other review that called this teen fiction. Stereotypes acting in silly ways.

use of same description many times over. example he uses in a heartbeat alot. could use a 10th of a second, lightning fast ect.