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Perfection

Review from Hunted →

Another amazing book. It will make you laugh, give you goosebumps and make you want to listen to it again as soon as you finish it

Poor writing

Review from Skill Eater →

Poor writing of action sequences and cringe worthy MC who makes a series bone headed moves. He’s some version of a monster hunter with basically no ranged gear. It would be like a mountain man trying to hunt bears or elephants with a sword. And the Epic skill from the grand finale battle is a..

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Slow

Review from Skill Eater →

This story moves very slow. I found myself not caring about the MC, and just wanting to get to a fight to see how he would grow. The world building is phenomenal. There are great descriptions about the town, people and environment, but little action.

too descriptive

Review from Skill Eater →

the story has way too much fluff in it. Noone cares how magical and otherworldly the mushroom tastes. all of the descriptors take away from the actual plot and emotions that the story generates. holy heap yall need to get to the point. stop putting words in just to fill space! seriously! describing fear ib..

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