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It was interesting to see the crew on the defensive for a change. It was also interesting to revisit some of the team’s history.

If you’re a huge animal lover and love sci-fi this is for you. The whole thing revolves around conservation and all that crap. Not for me.

The pacing is off …too much minutia in this dungeon This became background noise more often than i’d like. By that I mean I tuned out at times cuz the story wasn’t holding my interest. I like a lot of things about the MC, the n his lil cheat-code situation, but the storytelling gets bogged..

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why, does mc always find woman in the 1st book.. its more important for mc to grow.. most mc lack focus.. also narrator is good but slow.. also so much filler internal thoughts.

Great sequel and looking forward to the next one. Some sections felt like page fillers as author restated the same thing as if to remind the reader in full detail of all relevant facts regarding the next upcoming plot point. Slowed down the story and made me tune out a couple times.

the chapters can be wordy , the author says something, says it again slightly different, and again before getting to the point that was obvious 10 flowery and puffed up sentences earlier. the story is good enough to put up with but it should be 90 chapters instead of 107 if the fluff was tamed..

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It was just difficult to follow as the characters in the storyline just developed so fast with no real explanation.

After listening to this book I believe the author has finally figured out his direction in which he wants to drive the story. Jason struggles about Lucky and their friendship and devotion to the crew is heartfelt and believable.

This continues from the other books and you can tell the author has really started to get into the groove of his storyline. You can see from the other books which were essentially stand alone vs this one which appears to kick off a new story arcs. Narration is great as always

I’m already many books ahead in the series but I can say this kicks off a lot of the future story arcs and the Omega Force series really picks up steam