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Jarring storytelling with dumb happy ending

Review from Blueshift →

Poorly written with jarring details and switching of narration skills that pull you from the story and suspend disbelief. The author also assumes that the reader needs more hand-holding than is necessary, meaning that all potentially interesting details of world-building are left out, making me wonder if there was any real thought put into this..

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Meh.

Review from To Get to the Other Side →

Thought I’d like this one more than I did. It had potential but never quite got there for me. Also, I didn’t think the male narrator voice matched the character.