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Great story but….

Review from Hunted →

As usual the action was great with the right amount of humor that is not overdone. Loved this side quest story but there was too much recapping. It felt like it was a best of episode from an 80’s sitcom where the characters sit around reminiscing about everything they have done over the past season…

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way the story is told is annoying

Review from Skill Eater →

generally I like most power fantasy stories, this one I found annoying.the plot armor is ridiculous, MC is about to die then something happens just as he’s about to die and the second before death the plot saves him with a convenient upgrade.Also the story seems really dragged out, even going back in time to..

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Gets better after a rough start

Review from Skill Eater →

Okay… start with a barely alive MC, put him with an OP Core that takes a long time to unlock. Then have bad guys come in to hurt him more. That part is pretty good, and the new core, see the book title, is interesting. But then… the character is in his own head A..

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