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too descriptive

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the story has way too much fluff in it. Noone cares how magical and otherworldly the mushroom tastes. all of the descriptors take away from the actual plot and emotions that the story generates. holy heap yall need to get to the point. stop putting words in just to fill space! seriously! describing fear ib..

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ok but mc is a moron

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the story is interesting but I can’t get past the Mc idiotic behavior. every single fight he barely wins because he constantly underestimates his opponents or just does really dumb things midbattle. he is supposed to be more powerful have the upper hand but somehow he is always barely making it out of a fight..

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