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Inconsistent Protagonist Wrecks Omega Series

Review from Savage Homecoming →

Author ruins the Omega series by having Captain Burke completely break character and “jump the shark” with incredibly sophomoric plot inventions. Impossible to tolerate the 3rd Chapter, which is so absurd that I started praying the fool Captain would die and end the story quickly. It’s bad enough to terminate the series for me, and..

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Crushers story

Review from Return of the Archon →

This story revolves around Crushers background and role in his alien race. Crushers is actually the leader of the legions and their best fighter. We start getting more background to the supporting characters in the series now

good authors make good reading.

Review from Skill Eater →

great! all of it, author, story, characters. everything is fantastic. my only main issue is the author drops the character in mid step with zero known info about this “system”. you eventually get some info about his previous life and circumstances, but it’s a little late at that point as I didn’t really care. any..

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