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Cringe

Review from Federation Chronicles →

This book is poorly constructed, the main character is the ultimate Marty Stu where he’s good at everything the first time, he’s amazing in every way and the only thing stopping him from winning everything is the opportunity to get into a fight. The book is also sexist in a 1960s James Bond kind of..

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Weaker than the first volume

Review from The Price of Power →

In this book, Zach gets more screen time than Ryun, which gives a bit of balance after the first book. Both original protagonists continue to be both ambiguous and interesting. It’s not clear which, if either of them, is in the right, which makes for good storytelling. I rated the first book five stars, but..

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Good story

Review from Federation Chronicles →

The story is good, kept me engaged. I enjoyed listening to it. I did need to take a break so I could get my homework done for a weekend. I was finding it hard to stop listening.

Shit Show. Negative the whole way

Review from Burn Box →

I thought we were getting into some good but the whole story is a down story. This will be the last burn box I listen to. Long story with nothing to root for. Except the dog Nixie. Noah has no idea the whole way. I’ll listen to slow burn again over this.