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Great story, amateur writing

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This is one where the story is very captivating, but you are pulled out of it way to often by really poor writing.This book is clearly written by an amateur with no editor. Biggest complaint is unnecessary reputation, lots of “he used stab and stabbed”, or “the chamber was a large chamber”. there was also..

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poor pacing

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Too much talk about power levels with no context in the beginning. Author gives no scale and no build up for how strong they’re supposed to be. You don’t start with the main characters at god tier. Wasts too much time talking about power levels and weapons of people who die instantly. Why should I..

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Absolutely Loved it!

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Fantastic story! I cannot stress enough how entertaining and refreshing it was to read something that doesn’t disappoint. It’s got a good story and it’s long enough to make you feel like you’re actually able to relax and enjoy the story. Everything is so well developed and the characters are relatable. I cannot wait for..

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