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Beyond unbelievable

Review from No Way Out →

This is the worst emp book I have come across. Halfway through all this far fetched nonsense I quit!The characters are annoying, tedious and boring. Then there is the narrator who puts on this whining voice for several of the characters!

Loses a star to grounding

Review from Power →

it was a decent read, a little slow pace, but whatever. My biggest grip with the story is the mechanic doesn’t realize that almost all car electrical systems are already grounded.

Best of both worlds

Review from Proliferation →

This is an amazing blend of all my favorite genres. My only complaint would be is it it sort of drags a little bit the writer seems to be get stuck in his characters daily schedules.. and I’m a little sad. We keep falling more and more out of touch with Maggie, but that doesn’t..

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Relations with woodland animals and the elderly

Review from Power →

The title sums the plot up well. Semi science, magical lab accident happens and turns everyone young again with magic powers, but that’s almost a back ground story to the protagonist pulling both a Chris-Chan and a Diddy by first sleeping with his motherly 80 year old neighbor and then a fox he raised who..

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Cringey

Review from Power →

The premise in the sample sounded interesting, but I couldn’t get to the end of this one. Made it to chapter 8 and had to stop. Hearing the phrase “rock your world” over and over again got to be grating on the ears. Using some variety of language and conversation topic would be nice. The..

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One word describes story, narration and MC, “DULL”

Review from Power →

DULL – this starts off with a promising premise as far as lit RPGs anyways, but then descends into the most simplistic, pedantic and dull Main Character and story narration ever. I seriously worry about the declining levels of sophistry we are witnessing in real time with what is being passed off as literature these..

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