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Comedy falls flat

Review from An Unexpected Hero →

Great performance of a bad story. MC is so stupid that he becomes annoying. This is another MC who before coming from earth to a new world is doing nothing with his life. He has a system companion he calls Screeny, that he does not ask even basic questions. Screeny continuously gives bad advice to..

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Gets Better Every Time

Review from Chronos Warlock →

I am really enjoying this series so far. It is extremely impressive that the author manages to really make the most of the time magic / Groundhog Day movie-like theme; though I have experienced many stories using the same concept, Stovall deftly claims it and makes it fresh again. The heartfelt struggles and growth of..

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Good story told with terrible writing

Review from Mimic & Me 2 →

Like the title says, I enjoyed the story and characters, the performance is pretty good, but I almost gave up a few times because the poor execution of writing and seemingly nonexistent editing. It could be half as long and have ten times more variety in adjectives to make a great book.