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Mixed Bag

Review from The Heroic Villain →

The story has a number of good points. The overarching concepts had tons of potential and were, broadly at least, well executed. The MC’s mental trauma in particular was well done. However, several of the other characters tried too hard to be quirky and funny and came off as annoying caricatures instead, and most of..

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