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Difficult to finish

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This book was a struggle for me to finish. The mechanics of the game go completely out the window and the combats just seem silly. The MC just feels like they’re godmode and theres never a point where they struggle. And then there are the monologs. They go on forever and get so cringy.

Excellent performance, fun story.

Review from Mimic & Me →

I really enjoyed this story. There is good character development, a fresh take on the genre and a good sense of humor. I would have liked a bit more action but that isn’t a big deal. The story is fun, I’m looking forward to the sequel.

Wild, confusing, turbulent ride,

Review from Mimic & Me →

I wanna give compliments before criticism. the author has a lot of good ideas, and a lot of inspiration from Everybody Loves Large Chests. World building is good but under developed. Creative, but poorly executed. This story has a lot of potential, but as it stands, it’s like easy reading junk food, not bad, but..

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