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didn’t enjoy

Review from Dead Tired I →

honestly couldn’t finish the book. I have made it about half way through, and can’t keep going. the book moves at a snails pace, the charters are so one dimensional it hurts, the first 2 characters are a girl that’s 18 years old who is spoken in a child’s voice for some reason, her only..

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Good story, bad characters

Review from Wizard’s Tower 3 →

I’ve enjoyed the previous books in the series, but unfortunately, this one didn’t live up to my expectations. The author seems to be attempting to create drama and evoke emotional situations repeatedly, but these attempts often fall flat. As the series progresses, the lead character becomes increasingly snobbish. At this point, it feels cliché, reminiscent..

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Mary Sue, CIS male write women… as expected

Review from Delvers LLC →

the reading is great, with clear character transitions… but the writing is of a emotional and gender awareness level that I’d only have found acceptable as a teenager in the 90’s. Female characters’ stories are .. in service to their romance with the dark, brooding, and combat-experienced MC.