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Character development

Review from Warsinger →

The writer does an outstanding job of connecting you to the cast, narration is very good, difference between characters and sound addition add to the experience . I’m not sure how to correctly pronounce scimitar but it took me a bit to understand what was being said.

disappointed.

Review from Everybody Loves Large Chests →

honestly, they way that people have talked about this book being super graphic and overly sexual in some scenes is just preposterous. yeah I can admit that there were some good kills, but the sex scenes were just plain lack luster, they just said what was happening and when, no big details or descriptions. it..

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Heart and Humor

Review from The Butcher’s Masquerade →

It’s has everything. Deep story. Riviting suspense. Emotional weight. Well crafted humor. The ending was equal parts epic and tragic. (especially when they all died and realized they were all in a dream… Oh and Carl is Donut’s father.)

Great Characters, ESPECIALLY Karalty, But….Frustrating Cycles. Would Definitely Recommend.

Review from The Archemi Online Chronicles Boxset: Books 1, 2 & 3 →

Overall, the story is engaging and interesting. The characters are great, especially Karalty, Surry (idk how to spell her name), and Rin. And the world and worldbuilding is awesome. The frustrating part, is the main character runs into a constant cycle of Befriend people, get betrayed……Befriend, betrayed. and constantly makes terrible decisions that land him..

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