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I love it but…

Review from The Eye of the Bedlam Bride →

I love how everything is building up but I do not know how I feel about Carl just getting beaten and beaten constantly. I know it’ll make him tough but the man is constantly get abuse not just physically but mentally. From the dungeon, the outside people who deem helping him and the constant reminder..

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Too religious

Review from Man of War →

The author clearly has a proselytizing intent here and it’s unwelcome. it pops out at the dramatic moments in a weird fourth wall breaking way that gives credit to a god that wasn’t in the story at all.