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Blid repetitiveness or character consistency

Review from Vortena: Everybody Loves Large Chests, Volume 3 →

A child, from the perspective of human biological age, commits contemporary immoral, for protagonist whimsical, actions so as to not get ostracized in his community-to-be. Geopolitical conflict is brewing in the background. God’s are engaged in fate measuring contest. Utterly farcical story with contemporary horrendous actions. Main theme could be morality of innocence. Do ethically..

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Great narration, story falls flat

Review from End of the World 2 →

JTJ and cast did a wonderful job on this, the problem is the story, which is a great idea and some of the concepts are good too such as the magic/cultivation system. However the characters suck, especially the MC. He has lived an entire life already full of death, trials, and constant fighting, which would..

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Pretty solid story minus some litrpg tropes

Review from Mimic & Me →

Decent story only bogged down by the standard litrpg tropes that make defining strength hard. Blend of precents to do things like bleed clash with how realistic and normal cuts are. Also suffers from goodie two shoes syndrome where he can murder guards then feel bad about everything but still better than an edgelord

No more Donut, PLEASE

Review from The Butcher’s Masquerade →

I’m begging the author to either seriously upgrade Donut’s insufferable attitude to something less self-centered and entitled, or get rid of her. She’s such a frustrating character to read, especially as an MC! It would maybe be tolerable if she was an intermittent side character, but it’s painful reading the scenes she’s in. It wasn’t..

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Surprisingly good.

Review from Wizard’s Tower, Books 1-3 →

The main character is a very powerful half-elven wizard, who just wants to be left alone to research in peace. Or so he says. He is constantly getting stuck in political struggles, or finding new threats to defend his countrymen from. All the while, he struggles with loneliness. His being a half elf means everyone..

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Too Far On Religion Bashing

Review from The Eye of the Bedlam Bride →

Look man, although you’re vulgar you write good stories and clever characters. I personally think only clever people can write clever characters and Carl is extremely smart. You lost me when you insulted my God. I can accept making fun of Chritians, we’re not perfect and I can be humble enough to take a joke..

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