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I have a headache

Review from Mimic & Me →

The first 3 chapters are some of the worst I’ve ever read. The author obviously wants you to know that the nobles are bad people but does it in such a way that it becomes mind numbing. It becomes almost instantly unbelievable. Yes there are bad people out there but no one acts like this…

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Cringy at best.

Review from World-Tree Online →

This is written like a teenager writing a bad B movie. it’s just terrible in every aspect. Story bad, characters horrible. The whole thing is just cringy. Narration didn’t have a chance of making this good.

Pretty good!

Review from Mimic & Me →

I got this book on a whim due to Jeff Hayes Narrating; I am glad I did, this is not some epic, but an adventure and it delivers. It is brutal and funny. Look forward to a new way of adventuring and the second book! Narration was on point and the story had very little..

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Cringe worthy writing.

Review from Mimic & Me →

I’m curious if the authors switched chapters or something. I felt like there was a significant drop in writing quality around chapter 9. I certainly did not enjoy having my time wasted with below average writing. The prose was full of extraneous elements, boring platitudes and unimaginative dialogue. If writing quality bugs you, stay away..

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