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A compelling story marred by lazy writing and inconsistent editing.

Review from Rampage →

I did really enjoy this story. So it’s unfortunate that it is so consistently inconsistent. I was regularly pulled from the storyline by lazy writing cliche’s and editing fails. The author repeatedly uses clunky, one-sentence, backstory justifications for why a character says or does something that seems stupid or incongruous. Which just feels like he..

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Really Not Much Story

Review from Life Reset: A LitRPG Novel →

The is some merit to the criticisms that this book is mostly reading character sheets. I think it probably works a lot better in print, though it still feels like the book equivalent of watching someone else stream a video game. Just buy my style. Performance was very good though, with quality editing.

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Review from Corruption →

Well I loved the first two, but the ending to this one is a punch to the neck. Like game of thrones kinda ending. Will there be a come back? Or will we being listening to a puppets story. Disappointing to say the least. Shame… Performance was great.