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Poorly written male Mary Sue

Review from Delvers LLC: Golden Handcuffs →

Had been enjoying this series except for Mr. Dues ex Henry but this one just goes over the top. Henry can invent bombs( in a world where bombs are not allowed to be invented), Henry can basically single-handedly destroy a planet devouring demon. Henry is so…Henry that a basically ageless demi-god decides to leave her..

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An excellent addition to an excellent series!

Review from Warsinger →

I’ve really been enjoying Archemi Online. The characters are well written and feel like real people, with Hector being a well rounded protagonist, even if he has a love of puns, lol. Suri is a fantastically strong woman, and Karalti is very lovable, aside from being an awesomely powerful dragon! In fact, all of the..

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the performance is GREAT but….

Review from Fateseal →

the narration and overall presentation is great, but the story is lacking. it isn’t one that grips me and makes me want to keep going. it feels like the author tried to combine a haram novel a litrpg and a scifi novel together but missed something in all of those genres. it left me feeling..

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I cant finish it. Im sorry

Review from Adventurer Academy →

I tried, i really did. I kept taking breaks and coming back to it. It’s not poorly written or poorly narrated, Its simply that the main character is so cheesy and childish. The book says hes 20 years old but hes still getting into fights with his mom about what he can and cant do..

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