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Fantastic first book in a series

Review from Delvers LLC →

Confession I’ve read this book before. I loved it then and still love it now. It has great characters and the world building is top notch. I got the audio book as something to listen too while doing stuff around the house and was blown away at how good a job Jeff hays does with..

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On Another Level

Review from Life Reset: Conquest →

Love the series! I ended up feeling like a cheater. I know how you explained how 4th tiered boss mobs are on another level, but that Spearman just decimated those Knights! I was like ,”Challenge? What Challenge? This isn’t even a fight anymore ?.” So much so, that I really thought that “with a touch..

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Basic Editing?

Review from Ascension Series: Volume I →

Does the writer know any words other than ‘said’? It is repetitive and pervasive and once heard can’t be unheard. Dear Ken, what follows is list of words you might try just to make the dialogue blocks less painfully repetitive. Replied Responded Agreed/disagreed Cried Shouted Fretted Worried Suggested Advised Wondered Demanded Supplied Ordered Whispered Complained..

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Much better than most

Review from Challenge →

Challenge is a much better LitRPG than most. I have listened to or read many series in the genre. Some of the common traits among the least appealing ones are; emotionally weak MC, unwilling MC, unintelligent MC accompanied by much more intelligent secondary character to push him along. The MC does not share the aforementioned..

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