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The Story

Review from Nigmus Online →

The story started off ok, at times you really have no true protagonist. The author fails to take into account that this game would not be as popular do to the perma death if you are not super rich AND if pvp griefers in game could possible HIDE your body to prevent resurrection. Then this..

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Maureen

Review from Obligations Incurred →

A self-obsessed teen farm girl who tells the much older sensible, smart(we’re told they are dumb because they don’t understand the crappy and sexist culture of a brand new world while constantly playing hero and the surrounding characters are in aww while insulting them for being so clever and op) heroes are dumb and they..

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Wrong in every way

Review from Bone Dungeon →

I hate this stupid fairy. I haven’t found myself cursing any character in almost any book as much as I did the fairy. The author has clearly read better other better dungeon core books. The problem is too much happens too fast for book 1. Oh there is a problem but that’s going to kill..

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my thoughts

Review from Adventurer Academy →

first of all it’s not to inventive with its story but It kept me wanting more. the main cast of characters where good and ended up making me laugh quite a few times. my favorite part definitely is the inventive ways they used magical equipment. it had a few moments where I thought of my..

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OP

Review from The Greystone Chronicles: Book One: Io Online →

Main characters are way to overpowered. A rich boy whose daddy owns and runs the game gets massive overpowering for himself and friends. He hates PK’s even though they are a legitimate part of game and blames them for his mom’s death even though they had nothing to do with it. I love all the..

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Maureen’s BS

Review from Delvers LLC →

I think this is a great story, BUT the attempt at BS justification of this girl forcing her way into Henry’s life while trying yo give her the high road was too much. It’s like watching the author gut the characters of their freedom to act as they normally would to justify crappy plot. And..

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Low Stakes + Low Challenge = Low Tension

Review from Darkness Fallen →

Unfortunately, Willmarth seems unwilling to put reasonable limits on the abilities and progress of the main cast. I’m sure he’s heard this criticism before as he seems to have made a new character in this book to raise this issue and have Alexander get angry and not really justify why his crew is so powerful..

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