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Fun Start to LitRPG series

Review from Delvers LLC →

I found this first book to be fun and well written. Honestly, it reminded me a great deal of something William D. Arrand/Randi Darren might write. This story keeps the crunchiness low and also doesn’t jump straight into harem elements. Though, however, there are quite a few hints that it is likely on the horizon…

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Stupid protagonist

Review from Irrelevant Jack →

The main character is irritating, stupid, and unlikable. It’s made worse by Jeff Hays and his breathy voice. It sounds like he can’t end a sentence without running out of breath. The side character are uninteresting, selfish, and stupid. Stupidity seems to be a running theme in this story. For the most part, none of..

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Camping

Review from Tales of a Northblood →

Story is about mom and dad going on a boring camping trip with the entitled annoying teenagers. A Story were apparently a ranger that spends over 200 days in the woods each year and cannot make a campfire, I know 1st year boy scouts or cub scouts can do that. Very shallow characters and lack..

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characters are unrealistic

Review from Delvers LLC →

first of… Jeff Hays is amazing as usual… but the poor guy had terrible lines to read. which brings me to my second point… the dialog… and character internal monologues…like.. these people are not life-like. I found myself mixing up which personality (if you can even call it a personality) was which. third thing of..

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Fun but rushed

Review from Temple of Sorrow →

it feels like the story is rushed without giving you time to feel for the characters whenever something dramatic happens to them. it just goes “here is problem”, then “solution to problem and everyone is happy”. The over arching story is interesting and the performance is good so I will continue with the series.